Thought it was pretty funny and it sorta reminds me of mad mad mario, well the concept at least. The only thing that could use some work is the ending. It was a little too sudden I found, so it makes us feel as though it just left us hanging. Overall it was funny and the animation was simple yet effective, just the ending felt a tad out of place.
hit a greater target!
Haha honestly I think I'd give him more credit for hitting a target chicken 100 feet away from him rather than a target 10 feet in front of him. I like the zooming animation of navi for the opening scene but the whole animation itself was pretty short. It's understandable for the sake of the joke but a bit more would not have been a bad thing.
About that whole arguement to bring back that one character alive again and about a minute later Yusuke kills himself. Funny stuff. I liked how there was some body animation this time around as well (the Blue guy's whispering animation was really funny in my opinion). Loved it, Sweet job!
The monocle made my day
This was pretty well done and the english accent had me laughing but as for constructive criticism all I really have to say is to make your future animations longer. The fast pace for this suits it well to make sure you don't drag on the joke but I wouldn't mind to have seen a bit more to it. Nice job and sweet monocle!
Personally I don't think it's a good thing to have credits that are longer than your actual video. The good thing is that you do know how to animate sprites to an effective level, but you need to work on story writing and in this case time length. The punch line just wasn't anything to really laugh about and it all happens rather quickly. Just keep practicing and you should nail it, after all I see that this was experimental so just here to offer some advice.
Thanks, ya now that I have the basic movements it will be much easier to make a new and longer movie! and ya, the credits thing...lol
give him a hand indeed!
It's crazy to see how good your animations have become comparing to MGA. Great use of colours and facial expressions. Maybe not as spontaneous as most your other work but the way everything just goes WAY out of proportion from just one remark was hilarious. Wicked awesome job! WHEN'S NEXT MONTH?
The ending joke just made my day! Very funny. I really loved the way you did the body animations, it reminds me of how classic comedy animations would be with not a real sense of realism, but enough to grasp the concept. It was just the right length for the jokes to be made and overall the animation was just excellent! Nice job!
All from waiting for the bus?
Well hell, I should take the bus more often! somewhat longer than your other shorts, but the animation is still very smooth and clean. I like how most the story was music driven as well. nicely done
LOL I REMEMBER
I haven't played Super Mario 64 in a long time so at first I was trying to get what was going on, but as soon as it came to life it all came back to me! God that was funny. I really liked the animation like how before he sat he flapped his suit and the little things like that. Overall it was great and brought back some fun... but scary, memories haha. Nice job
not a bad start
For a first it's not too bad, I'ld just suggest adding some fighting music in the background. It's short though and it would have been better to add more before submitting because it doesn't really give us much to give advice on except for "it should be longer". So keep working on the overall speed of the animation cause there was standing around which isn't good to see in a fight, and you might want to find a way to clean up the sprites a bit because I notice small blue or green blocks popping up around certain sprite animations. nice try, just keep practicing.
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